Idunn Sofie

This became really good! The few changes really did bring the story out in a great way! I only noticed a couple of very small nitpicks here, but I couln't ...

Hahahaha, this is priceless! Congratulations on giving me the biggest laugh of today! As a rought draft, I think this is really good, but I think it can be made ...

This was such a moving piece! I had tears in my eyes by the end and I totally agree with PaulClover; I just wanted to go ang hug my own ...

This was a really good story! You had me paying attention at once and the build up was good! I was constantly wondering what the secret was and I felt ...

Aw, this was really amazing! It was such a good read. You have a real talent for making thoughts that are just feelings and surreal experiences into words and sentences! ...

This story is really good! It has great flow, the build ups and turning points are great and the story is tied together in a perfect way, every paragraph complimenting ...

Honestly, from the bottom of my heart: This piece is bloody brilliant! I am in love with it! When I was reading I was completely baffled, but in a good ...

This was supergood! It was intruiging and interesting. I was shocked, I felt sorry for her, I was disgusted, I was thinking "awww" and I generally had a lot of ...

Hey! I really like this! It's catching, intriguing and easy to follow. I think the concept is great, it's a bit cliché, but you made it original with your writing. ...

Hey! I really liked this story! I think it was very "alive". It wasn't some big, epic moment or someone having a life-altering experience, it was just an everyday. You ...

Or hiding in a tree? Or are you hiding in a tree? Next there came a letter, From the leader of your crew, That things have gotten better, The next ...

This piece is simply beauty transformed to words. I honestly loved reading it. The mood was really sad, but at the same time it gave you the feeling of knowing ...

The thing about reading your stuff now, is that I'm so aware of how young you are. I love this poem, but what I love the most about it is ...

Hey! I got into your writings, so I'll review this as well! First of all, I love the first part where we see Jamie (I think) in the morning. I'm ...

Hey! First of all I have to say that I really like your writing style! Your sentences have a nice flow and you have neatly sectioned paragraphs. I couln't find ...